How long can I stay alive?
I’ve tried to crawl so many times
But it lengthens as far as I strive. Now sunk down to the bottom
Up to my knees in regret
I wonder how long these hands can hold on
In their search for a new sunset Feeling the walls of the pit that’s been dug
I look again for some way out
But there’s no escaping this dark narrow hole
And no around can hear me shout Isolated, with no way out,
I abandon my hope and sigh
I have asked for help so many times
But I never get a reply I can feel my spirit leaving my soul
I feel so helpless
Now that it’s out of my control
When there’s no option to keep my mind and body whole…
How do I find a way out?
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life has its ups and downs. you can make it. this is a nice poem.:)
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Everything has been going wrong since my father died. I just feel like I died with him
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i am so sorry about your father. my dad lost his job and his life turned up side down when his father died. it took him a year to get over it. he was the one who took care of him while he was struggling. so i do understand your situation.
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well. Having to deal with the bits and pieces of everything he left me is just terrible. I never had a relationship with my mom, and now I am constently having to deal with her anger
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i'm not going to pretend i know the whole story annette but i hope you can find the strength that you need more now. your post is beautiful, i think you need to write more as it can help you express those inner feelings. would it be possible to talk to your mom? she is loosing it--she must be very heartbroken because of your dad's lose. she could not deal with it other than getting angry.
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time is the greatest healer, this is a time were you have to be strong ,mentally and physically, may the force guide you through these times.....
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nice poem